"Our Love."

Category: Writers Block

Post 1 by Winterfresh (This is who I am, an what I am about. If you don't like it, too damn bad!!!) on Sunday, 03-Jul-2005 18:53:28

Our love is strong
Swift
Soothing as the sound of cool ocian water
No one can define our love
happy but sad
Angry but glad
No one can tell us what to do
They tell me to stay away
but it is impossible to run away from that gentle touch
Those soft kisses
that I love so much
Our love is all that matters
It runs free as a wild stallion
with nothing to hold it back
no chains to bind it
no gate to lock it
Just prancing the wild
Our love is our own

Post 2 by asdfghjkl (Account disabled) on Sunday, 03-Jul-2005 22:25:48

Amen!!!

Post 3 by Goblin (I have proven to myself and the world that I need mental help) on Monday, 04-Jul-2005 11:40:55

Wow!!

Post 4 by dissonance (Help me, I'm stuck to my chair!) on Tuesday, 05-Jul-2005 2:29:54

Sam, I love the subtle rhythm and iliteration you put in there. I also think the simili was creative. You stay with him if it's the last thing you do! Don't listen to the rest of them, you know him and your love is your own!

Post 5 by Inesle1987 (Account disabled) on Tuesday, 05-Jul-2005 2:35:23

Weaseldance I love that poem!!!!!